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I am in love.
In love with you.
To hug you, to kiss you
I need you
But you are with him
And not with me

You sleep on me
On my shoulder
On my lap
I kiss you goodbye
But you are with him
And not with me

Your life is lacking
No adventure no spark.
I have spark
He does not
But you are with him
And not with me

You seek happiness
I seek you
We won’t get what we want
Whilst you are with him
And not with me
©2008-2009 ~Benji-man
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Hmm. I should explain a few things:
a) It's 1140, I need to write but no rhyme is forthcoming
b) Read This magazine said they preferred my free verse. So I gave it a go.
c) I don't like it, but I don't like most of my stuff.
d) Girl on my bus (for those of you that follow the "story") is no longer on my bus :(:(:( I've tried not to make things messy. For months. Last night I made things messy. Without actually getting her. Balls
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*palmtoface*

I think you should try prose.

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
So you don't like?
Oh, I'm planning to. Don't interupt the muses!

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I was here,
Here I was,
Was I here?
Yes, I was
meh, you know what I think now.
yayyy! I don't see any... tsk

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
not fiar, peple aren't allowed to wallow in self pity more than me.

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Why couldn't I have been born in the eighteenth century when fat white women were actually in style.
:p

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I was here,
Here I was,
Was I here?
Yes, I was

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